3-43th Homework

Hello, [이름]! ^_^

Are you having a great day at work?
I hope you are. ^_^
Thanks for taking the time to answer our essay question for today.

I think being realistic and optimistic are equally important.

I also believe that you can be realistic and optimistic at the same time.

It\'s just a matter of balancing things out.

Being realistic guides you in creating achievable goals and objectives while being optimistic gives you the drive to go on even when you are tired and hopeless.

That is my point-of-view in this matter.

I hope you\'re doing great.

See you again on Thursday. ^_^

~Teacher C[이름]

Being optimistic is good for my and your future.

>> Being optimistic is good for our future.
When we start to do something to achieve a goal, we have to make a plan appropriately.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> When we start to do something to achieve a goal, we need to come up with an appropriate plan.
The plan that is made based on the situation at that moment is very realistic.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Coming up with a plan that is based on the situation at that moment is very realistic.
Sometimes, we make some plan, thinking events would be occurred in the future, for example, buying something, making a journey.

>> Sometimes, we make some plans and think of events that would occur in the future, for example, buying something or making a journey.
Now, even if we don\'t have enough money to afford it, we make the plan thinking an incoming in future.

>> Now, even if we don\'t have enough money to afford it, we make a/the plan, thinking of the future.
At that time, we can divid into two categories, optimist and realist.

>> At that time, we can divide people into two categories, optimist and realist.
Realist wants to make the plan after confirming the his incoming.

>> [Do you mean]: A realist wants to make the plan after confirming what is coming.
But optimist tries to do something now, since he think he will finally get his incoming.

>> But an optimist tries to do something now, since he thinks he will finally get what he is hoping for. 

It would be not a proper example for this question.

>> It would not be a proper example for this question.
Anyway, I think we should have always an optimistic thought.

>> Anyway, I think we should always have an optimistic thought.
If we don\'t have this thought, we could not do something proactively.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> If we don\'t have this way of thinking, we could not do something proactively.
So, when we try to do something to get a success, the first thing that we have take is being optimistic.

>> So, when we try to do something to get success, the first thing that we have do is to be optimistic.
Also, being realistic is important.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Being realistic is also important.