3-44th Homework

Hello there [이름]! ^_^
We have another topic to discuss in your homework and I think you\'ve created a nice essay.

I\'d like to think that obstacles are our staircases to success.

It\'s just a matter of how you see it and how you\'re going to use it.

People who only see an obstacle for what it is don\'t usually succeed in life.

However, people who see the opportunity underlying the obstacle often get ahead in life.

They see an opportunity hiding inside the problem and use it to their advantage.

I think, people who are truly successful are not afraid of obstacles.

Anyhow, that is my opinion in this matter.

I hope you\'re doing great.

See you again tomorrow.

~Teacher C[이름] :)

I think some obstacles could become a beneficial thing.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I think some obstacles could give positive outcomes.

In this case, it depends on how to think about the obstacles.

>> In this case, it depends on how you think about the obstacles.
However, there are many excepts that we could not overcome, even though we did the best.

>> However, there are many obstacles that we could not overcome, even though we did our best.
In my case, I have to move a company if my contract with the company is ended.

>> In my case, I have to move to another company if my contract with the company is ended.
So, it is very dangerous to sustain my stable life with my family.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> It is very dangerous sustaining a stable life with my family.
On the other hand, it is not only dangerous.

>> [Do you mean]: On the other hand, it can also be non-dangerous.
It\'s because I can try to easily do something when I want it.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> It\'s because I have the ability to easily do something when I want it.
If I am a regular labor, I don\'t think about that, absolutely.

>> If I am a regular laborer, I will not think about that absolutely.
But in many cases, we could not seriously consider it.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> But in most cases, it\'s difficult to seriously consider it.
If we fall into the dangerous situation, we only try to escape from there.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Once we get into the dangerous situation, our first instinct is to try to escape from there.
Even if we are in the tough situation, if we can change the obstacles into the change and we become beneficial from there, which it is the best thing.

>> [Do you mean]: When we are in a tough situation, changing the obstacle into something beneficial would be the best thing we could do.

So, we could change a danger into a change but it is very difficult to do and it is not rare.

>> So, we could change a danger into an opportunity but it is very difficult to do it and it is not a rare occurrence.
We just only want to overcome something, maybe it would be the first thing for us to do.

>> We just only want to overcome something. Maybe it would be the first thing that we should do.