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2015-12-16 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

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During I work in my office, I usually chat with my co-workers. My co-workers and I talk about our working and job. However we sometimes talk about lunch menu, movies and a lot of things. My office has a chatter box so I have to use it during working. I like chatting on the phone with my husband and my children. My husband and I talk about our children and my husband's family-in-laws. He usually tells me I love you forever. He is very sweetly. Chatting is very usefull and popular in our lives.

강사 첨삭

      Hello [이름]!   You are really improving. Let\'s differentiate \'sweet\' from \'sweetly\'. sweet- (of a person or action) pleasant and kind or thoughtful. example: A very sweet nurse came along.   sweetly- in a pleasant, kind, and gentle way example: Kate nodded and smiled sweetly.   Teacher Venus^^   During I work in my office, I usually chat with my co-workers. >>>When I work in my office, I usually chat with my co-workers.   My co-workers and I talk about our working and job. >>>CORRECT However we sometimes talk about lunch menu, movies and a lot of things. >>>CORRECT My office has a chatter box so I have to use it during working. >>>My office has a chatbox so I have to use it when I work. I like chatting on the phone with my husband and my children. >>>CORRECT My husband and I talk about our children and my husband\'s family-in-laws. >>>My husband and I talk about our children and my family-in-laws. He usually tells me I love you forever. >>>He usually tells me \'I love you forever\'.   He is very sweetly. >>>He is very sweet. Chatting is very usefull and popular in our lives. >>>Chatting is very useful and popular in our lives.

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