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During I work in my office, I usually chat with my co-workers.
My co-workers and I talk about our working and job.
However we sometimes talk about lunch menu, movies and a lot of things.
My office has a chatter box so I have to use it during working.
I like chatting on the phone with my husband and my children.
My husband and I talk about our children and my husband's family-in-laws.
He usually tells me I love you forever.
He is very sweetly.
Chatting is very usefull and popular in our lives.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
You are really improving. Let\'s differentiate \'sweet\' from \'sweetly\'.
sweet-
(of a person or action) pleasant and kind or thoughtful.
example: A very sweet nurse came along.
sweetly- in a pleasant, kind, and gentle way
example: Kate nodded and smiled sweetly.
Teacher Venus^^
During I work in my office, I usually chat with my co-workers.
>>>When I work in my office, I usually chat with my co-workers.
My co-workers and I talk about our working and job.
>>>CORRECT
However we sometimes talk about lunch menu, movies and a lot of things.
>>>CORRECT
My office has a chatter box so I have to use it during working.
>>>My office has a chatbox so I have to use it when I work.
I like chatting on the phone with my husband and my children.
>>>CORRECT
My husband and I talk about our children and my husband\'s family-in-laws.
>>>My husband and I talk about our children and my family-in-laws.
He usually tells me I love you forever.
>>>He usually tells me \'I love you forever\'.
He is very sweetly.
>>>He is very sweet.
Chatting is very usefull and popular in our lives.
>>>Chatting is very useful and popular in our lives.
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