3-45th Homework

Hi, [이름]! ^_^

Thanks for once again taking the time to impart your thoughts about our essay question for today.

I think your sentences are great and your opinions are awesome.

I also think lying is not a good thing because it does not only corrupt your mind but also corrupts your character.

I\'ve known people who habitually lie and they can\'t seem to break the pattern.

I think it\'s addictive so it\'s important to train our children to constantly tell the truth and make them understand that it\'s never okay to lie.

Anyhow, this is my opinion in this matter.

I hope you\'re doing great.

I\'ll see you again on Tuesday. ^_^

~Teacher C[이름] :)

I think that to tell the truth is normal.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I think that telling the truth is normal.
Sometimes, there would be many problems that you want to cover without telling it.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> There are times when you want to keep your problems a secret.
At that time, people want to escape from the situation, it\'s because it is very difficult to endure it.

>> At that time, people want to escape from the situation. It\'s because it is very difficult to endure it.
After escaping from there, they don\'t do that again.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> They don\'t want to do that again after escaping from that situation.
But it is not easy to do that, since the problem and situation is already related to them.

>> CORRECT!

>> However, it is not easy to do that since the problem and situation is already connected to them.
Finally, they have to do it again even if they hate it.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> The sad thing about it is that, they have to do it again even if they don\'t like it.
So, I think that to tell the truth is better than to lie.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> That\'s why I think, telling the truth is betting than telling a lie.
However, to tell the truth always need a little of brave.

>> However, to tell the truth, you always need to be a little brave.
I think nothing is to do without efforts.

>> [Do you mean]: I think nothing is worth doing without efforts.
We have to sacrifice something to get one that we want.

>> We have to sacrifice something to get the one that we want.
In my life I experienced that we have to tell the truth in any situations.

>> [Do you mean]: In my life, I learned the importance of telling the truth in any situations.
If I lie once, I have to repeatedly lie to cover the previous lies.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Once I start lying, I have to repeatedly do it to cover the previous lies I made.
Finally, the problem related with the lies would be bigger and bigger and then to solve it we need more effort than the start.

>> Finally, the problem related with the lies would be bigger and bigger and then, to solve it we need more effort than the one we gave from the start.
So, many parent always say their children that you don\'t lie.

>> So, many parent always say to their children that it\'s bad to lie.

>> So, many parent always tell their children not to lie.