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After getting married, I couldn't meet my friends.
So I don't have many friends but I have close friends.
A few days ago, my friend called me so I was very happy because I couldn't hear my friend's voice for a long time.
My friend had a plain to meet our friends together next week.
We promised to meet together next week.
So we talked about a lot of things to meet the place and many more.
I miss them and I will talk about the past memories.
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After getting married, I couldn\'t meet my friends.
>>>CORRECT
So I don\'t have many friends but I have close friends.
>>>CORRECT
A few days ago, my friend called me so I was very happy because I couldn\'t hear my friend\'s voice for a long time.
>>>better: A few days ago, my friend called me so I was very happy because I couldn\'t keep in touch with my friend for a long time.
My friend had a plain to meet our friends together next week.
>>>My friend had a plan to meet other friends next week.
We promised to meet together next week.
>>>CORRECT
So we talked about a lot of things to meet the place and many more.
>>>So we talked about a lot of things like our meeting place and many more.
I miss them and I will talk about the past memories.
>>>I miss them and I will talk about our memories.
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