3-46th Homework

Hello, [이름]!

Thank you for writing in our composition board today and doing your best to create very nice sentences. ^_^

I agree when you said that all experiences are beneficial.

The good experiences motivate us to be consistent in our actions or to do better.

On the other hand, the bad experiences teach us to be cautious and to not repeat the same mistakes.

I think that\'s the reason why they say that experience is the best teacher.

It always has something to teach us.

Anyhow, that is my point-of-view in this matter.

I hope you\'re doing great at work.

See you again tomorrow.

Take care. :)

~Teacher C[이름]

I think that we can benefit from any experiences or any events, no matter what these are good or not.

>> I think that we can benefit from any experiences or any events, no matter if they are good or not.

OR >> I think that we can benefit from any experiences or any events, regardless if they are good or not.
If it wasn\'t good for us, we don\'t do it again, but if it was good for us, we do it again.

>> If it wasn\'t good for us, we will not do it again, but if it was good for us, we will do it again.
I think all things would be a base for us to live or work with someone.

>> I think all things would be a basis for us to live or work with someone.
The car accident is a very stressful event and we don\'t want to occur it.

>> The car accident is a very stressful event and we don\'t want it to occur.
But this is the accident that we can\'t control it, so it would be happened without our willingness.

>> But this is the accident that we can\'t control, so it would happen without our will.

OR >> But this is an accident that we can\'t control, so it would happen whether we like it or not.
If the car accident occurred, we first get nervous.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Once the car accident happens, our initial reaction is to get nervous.
Actually, I have not experienced the car accidents yet.

>> Actually, I have not experienced a car accident yet.
So, if I face it, I would get nervous.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> So, if I experience one, I would get nervous.
Anyway, It isn\'t a complex events only if it isn\'t related with a death.

>> [Do you mean]: Anyway, it isn\'t a complex event if death is not related to it.
So, if it occurred, the first thing that we have to is to call the insurance of car.

>> So, if it occurred, the first thing that we have to is to call the insurance company for the car.
We want to occur only the good things but it would not happen.

>> [Do you mean]: We only want good things to occur but it is not like that all the time.
When we face tough things, we have to solve it.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> When we face difficult situations, we have to solve it.
If we already experienced something, it would be helpful whether it was good or bad for me.

>> If we already experienced something, it would be helpful whether it was good or bad.
I wish that the bad events are not happened to me.

>> I wish that the bad events will not happen to me.