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2015-12-17 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

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After getting married, I don't talk about a lot of things with my husband at home. How about you? Are you married? Do you talk about a lot of things with your family at home? Sometimes my husband works late in his office. So I call him or he calls me and we talke about a lot of things on the phone. We usually talke about our future and our children. We can't talk about a lot of things for a long time because he has to do his work. I like this time.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!   It\'s great that you revised your sentences. Just remember the spelling of \'talk\'.   Teacher Venus^^   After getting married, I don\'t talk about a lot of things with my husband at home. >>>CORRECT How about you? >>>CORRECT    Are you married? >>>CORRECT   Do you talk about a lot of things with your family at home? >>>CORRECT Sometimes my husband works late in his office. >>>CORRECT So I call him or he calls me and we talke about a lot of things on the phone. >>>So I call him or he calls me and we talk about a lot of things on the phone. We usually talke about our future and our children. >>>We usually talk about our future and our children. We can\'t talk about a lot of things for a long time because he has to do his work.>>>CORRECT   I like this time. >>>CORRECT

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