3-47th Homework

Hi, [이름]!

How are you doing this afternoon?

Thank you for taking the time to write in our composition board even if you are quite busy. ^_^

I think computers are really important in the present time.

Probably because everything that we do nowadays depends on computers.

But I think you are correct when you said the human beings are slaves of computers and I honestly think that without computers, people won\'t be

able to function well.

Anyhow, I hope you\'re having a good day.

See you again next week.

Take care always.

~Teacher C[이름] :)

The computer is an essential tool to modern people.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> The computer is an important tool to people in the present time.
In my case, the start of a day is to turn on the computer.

>> In my case, the day starts by turning on the computer.
In an office, we just sit in front of the computer that we can do anything with.

>> In an office, we just sit in front of the computer and we can do anything with it.
If the power off and then we could not use the computer, there is no way to do something.

>> If the power is off and then we could not use the computer, there is no way to do something.
In the computer, there are some documents and e-mails, and so on.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> There are some documents and e-mails, and so on in the computer.
At the start, people invents the computer for convenient living without hardness.

>> [Do you mean]: At the start, people invented the computer for a convenient and easy living.
It is very speedy and correctly to do something, and then we wish to continuously develop up.

>> It is very speedy and accurately corrects something, and we wish to continuously develop it.
Nowadays, we cannot live without computers.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> We cannot live without computers nowadays.
If the computer system of banks powers down, we cannot withdraw the money and we cannot buy anything.

>> If the computer system of banks bugs down, we cannot withdraw the money and we cannot buy anything.
Maybe, we could not enter our house.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> It would be impossible for us to enter our house.
Everyday, we use the computer and we think of the computer as a tool.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> We use the computer everyday and we think of the computer as a tool.
On the other thought, maybe we would live as the servant depended on the computer.

>> On the other thought, maybe we would live as a servant for being depended on the computer.
Look, many people use the smart phone that is a kind of computer.

>> Look, many people use the smart phone that is a kind of a computer.
They walk around the road, seeing the display of it.

>> They walk around the road and display it.

OR >> They walk around the road and put it on display.
It\'s very ridiculous.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> It\'s very absurd.