3-49th homework

Hello there again [이름]!

Wow! You\'ve written two essay in a row. I think you\'re really doing great now. kkk. ^_^ That\'s great!

I absolutely agree when you said the USA is not necessarily better than your country or mine.

Sure, it is a big and powerful country but it still has poor and homeless people.

Many Filipinos go to the United States in the hopes of getting into a greener Pasteur but I think the Pasteur is already dry.

That\'s why when I hear someone say, \"I will go to the USA and work there\", all I could say is \"good luck\" because I know that the American economy is

on a shaky ground now.

Anyhow, this is just my opinion in this matter.

I hope you\'re doing great at work.

See you tomorrow. :)

~Teacher C[이름]

I don\'t think that USA is better than my country. 

>> I don\'t think that the USA is better than my country.
Maybe, many people think like that.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Maybe, a lot of people think that way.
USA is a big nation and the most powerful nation in the world.

>> The USA is a big nation and the most powerful nation in the world.
But it is not directly related with the good country.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> But this does not mean that it\'s a good country. 

It\'s because many people who born in their country live there for many years.

>> It\'s because many people who were born in their country live there for many years.
So, their feeling about USA is different from theirs.

>> So, their feeling about the USA is different from theirs.
I want to say it as a curiosity.

>> I want to say it out of curiosity.
The curiosity would like to feel as a good thing, but it is not true.

>> The curiosity would like to make us feel like it is a good thing, but it is not true.
Nowadays, the most thing that I want to do is a journey to other countries like Europe, Asia, Africa like that.

>> Nowadays, the greatest thing that I want to do is take a journey to other countries like Europe, Asia and Africa.
I got the journey several times.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I was able to travel plenty of times.
Whenever I did the journey, I always feel the familiarity at the end of the journey.

>> Whenever I did the journey, I always felt the familiarity at the end of the journey.
At the start, the feeling about the nation that we explore is very fresh and very curious.

>> At the start, the feeling about the nation that we explore is very fresh and we are full of curiosity.
During exploring the country, the curiosity and freshness for it lessen.

>> While exploring the country, the curiosity and freshness for it lessens.

OR >> During the exploration of the country, the curiosity and freshness for it lessens.
It\'s because I am used to it.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> It\'s because I am already familiar with it.
I think if you live anywhere, your life is not different from now.

>> I think if you live anywhere, your life will not be as different as now.
That\'s why we are human beings and we live together.

>> We are human beings and we live together.