3-4th Homework
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I agree that. The thing that human can only do is to express the feeling on a face. Without words, humans are able to express their emotion. And then we can catch it. Sometimes, the way of this expression is more powerful and efficient. So, we could lie without words and we could truly say without words. In the conversation, if there are many words, there may be some misunderstand each other. Conversation don't use only words. When we are talking about something with others, the opposite's face is very important to fully understand the meaning. Often, we usually use a phone to discuss something. But I have experienced the inconvenience, it's because I cannot see the opposite's face. When humans are talking with others, humans often use their eyebrow to show their emotion. Human only have white area in their eye, there are no animals having white area in their eye. It is very effective to show our own feeling to others. Anyway, I agree that silence could lie even if there is no words.
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I also agree to the opinion that silence could have multiple interpretations.
Sometimes it could mean that you are agreeing or sometimes, it could mean that you are telling a lie.
Most of the time, we should be very good at reading a person\'s body language to correctly interpret their silence.
You\'re right when you said communication is not just about words.
In fact, ninety percent in our communication does not involve words but bodily actions.
Anyhow, that is my point-of-view regarding this matter.
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I agree that.
>> I agree to that.
The thing that human can only do is to express the feeling on a face.
>> The thing that only humans can do is to express their feelings on their faces.
Without words, humans are able to express their emotion.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> This is why even without words, humans are able to express their emotions.
And then we can catch it.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> We understand it.
Sometimes, the way of this expression is more powerful and efficient.
>> Sometimes, this form of expression is more powerful and efficient.
So, we could lie without words and we could truly say without words.
>> So, we could lie without words and we could truly say it without words.
In the conversation, if there are many words, there may be some misunderstand each other.
>> In the conversation, if there are many words, there may be some misunderstandings with each other.
Conversation don\'t use only words.
>> Conversations don\'t only use words.
OR >> Words are not the only ones used in conversations.
When we are talking about something with others, the opposite\'s face is very important to fully understand the meaning.
>> When we are talking about something with others, the other persons\' facial expressions are very important to fully understand the meaning.
Often, we usually use a phone to discuss something.
>> We often use the phone to discuss something.
But I have experienced the inconvenience, it\'s because I cannot see the opposite\'s face.
>> But I have experienced the inconvenience. It\'s because I cannot see the other person\'s face.
When humans are talking with others, humans often use their eyebrow to show their emotion.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> When we talk to others, we often use our eyebrows to show our approval, disapproval or uncertainty.
Human only have white area in their eye, there are no animals having white area in their eye.
>> Humans are the only ones who have a white area in their eyes. There are no other animals that have that kind of trait/characteristic.
It is very effective to show our own feeling to others.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> It is very useful in showing our emotion to others.
Anyway, I agree that silence could lie even if there is no words.
>> Anyway, I agree that we could lie even if there are no words.
OR >> Anyway, I agree that we could like with our silence.
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