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2015-10-23 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

학생이 쓴 원문

I like going to a huge public sauna called “Jjim-jil-bang.” which has man's sauna, women's sauna and a huge lounge. I have to walk about 15 minute to go there. Many Korean women like going there. They usually take a rest there. They can eat, take a bath, talk with their friends and read some books there. I usually go th there with my daughters once a week. I like to bath with warm water. Especially I often go there in winter.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!   I\'m proud of you because you have more correct sentences. Some reminders: 1. It is not typically acceptable in formal or academic writing. 2. To + Verb = infinitive   Teacher Venus^^   I like going to a huge public sauna called “Jjim-jil-bang.” which has man\'s sauna, women\'s sauna and a huge lounge. >>>I like going to a huge public sauna called “Jjim-jil-bang” which has men\'s sauna, women\'s sauna and a huge lounge. I have to walk about 15 minute to go there. >>>I have to walk for about 15 minutes to get there. Many Korean women like going there. >>>CORRECT They usually take a rest there. >>>CORRECT They can eat, take a bath, talk with their friends and read some books there. >>>They can eat, take a bath, talk with their friends and read some books there. I usually go th there with my daughters once a week. >>>I usually go there with my daughters once a week. I like to bath with warm water. >>>I like to take a bath with warm water. Especially I often go there in winter. >>> I often go there in winter.

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