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I like going to a huge public sauna called “Jjim-jil-bang.” which has man's sauna, women's sauna and a huge lounge.
I have to walk about 15 minute to go there.
Many Korean women like going there.
They usually take a rest there.
They can eat, take a bath, talk with their friends and read some books there.
I usually go th there with my daughters once a week.
I like to bath with warm water.
Especially I often go there in winter.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
I\'m proud of you because you have more correct sentences. Some reminders:
1. It is not typically acceptable in formal or academic writing.
2. To + Verb = infinitive
Teacher Venus^^
I like going to a huge public sauna called “Jjim-jil-bang.” which has man\'s sauna, women\'s sauna and a huge lounge.
>>>I like going to a huge public sauna called “Jjim-jil-bang” which has men\'s sauna, women\'s sauna and a huge lounge.
I have to walk about 15 minute to go there.
>>>I have to walk for about 15 minutes to get there.
Many Korean women like going there.
>>>CORRECT
They usually take a rest there.
>>>CORRECT
They can eat, take a bath, talk with their friends and read some books there.
>>>They can eat, take a bath, talk with their friends and read some books there.
I usually go th there with my daughters once a week.
>>>I usually go there with my daughters once a week.
I like to bath with warm water.
>>>I like to take a bath with warm water.
Especially I often go there in winter.
>>> I often go there in winter.
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