3.5 Homework

2015-03-05 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Hi there! Good morning! How can you help your community? Come to think of it, I am ashamed to my roles about this issue that I have done. I have only worked hard for myself so far, but I think that it would help to encourage for our community at the second hand. I think that I should perform more services for our community from now on. Thank you!

강사 첨삭

Hello Mr. [이름]! I think that it is also important to be active in some community services for the improvement of our society. Have a great day. ~Kelly^^ Thank you for your homework. Hi there! Good morning!>> Correct.How can you help your community?Come to think of it, I am ashamed to my roles about this issue that I have done. >> Come to think of it, I have not done my role in my community. I have only worked hard for myself so far, but I think that it would help to encourage for our community at the second hand. >> I have only worked hard for myself so far, but it would be good if we encourage people to help in our community. I think that I should perform more services for our community from now on.>> I think that I should be more active in doing services for our community from now on.Thank you! >> Correct.

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