3.5 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there! Good morning!
How can you help your community?
Come to think of it, I am ashamed to my roles about this issue that I have done. I have only worked hard for myself so far, but I think that it would help to encourage for our community at the second hand. I think that I should perform more services for our community from now on.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Hello Mr. [이름]! I think that it is also important to be active in some community services for the improvement of our society. Have a great day.
~Kelly^^
Thank you for your homework.
Hi there! Good morning!>> Correct.How can you help your community?Come to think of it, I am ashamed to my roles about this issue that I have done.
>> Come to think of it, I have not done my role in my community.
I have only worked hard for myself so far, but I think that it would help to encourage for our community at the second hand.
>> I have only worked hard for myself so far, but it would be good if we encourage people to help in our community.
I think that I should perform more services for our community from now on.>> I think that I should be more active in doing services for our community from now on.Thank you!
>> Correct.
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