3-52th Homework

Hi, [이름]! ^__^v

Thank you very much for taking the time to write an essay for today.

I find your opinions in this matter really relevant because you\'re a family man.

I think you\'re right when you said parenting is a shared responsibility.

Despite the presence of divorce, I think this should not stop parents or couples from raising good kids.

Both mother and father are responsible in bringing up a good individual in the society.

Anyhow, I hope you\'re doing great today.

I\'ll see you again tomorrow. :)

~Teacher C[이름]

I think that parenting is good for children in the marriage situation.

>> I think that parenting is good for children in marriage.
A parent consist of a father and a mother from pre-historic.

>> [Do you mean]: Parents would include a father and a mother in pre-historic times.
I think there are several reasons on such an organization.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I think there are many reasons why such an organization exists.
In a family, there are several members, for example, father, mother, son, daughter, grandparents, etc.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> There are several members in a family, for example, father, mother, son, daughter, and grandparents. 

If there is to teach something to children, a complete organization is more useful than an incomplete thing.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> There are several members in a family, for example, father, mother, son, daughter and grandparents.
Parenting is not only responsible for a parent.

>> [Do you mean]: Parenting is not only the responsibility of one parent.
I think the balance is very important thing to live together, and also it is valuable for the health, including a body and mind.

>> I think finding balance is a very important thing to live together and it is also valuable for the health, including our body and mind.
All things in the world consists of a pair, for example, arms, eyes, and legs in our body.
>> All things in the world consist of a pair, for example, arms, eyes, and legs in our body.

We could not walk with one leg.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> We could not walk with having only one leg.
So, the family that consists of a mother and a father is the balance of our mind, which we feel cosy.

>> [Do you mean]: So, the family that consists of a mother and a father is a balance between two minds, which we feel cozy about.
Someone might disagree with me, but that is a general fact.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Others might disagree with me, but this is a fact.
I\'m very anxious about the divorce.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Divorce does not sit well with me.
The couple could divorce if there is some problem that could not solve each other.

>> The couple could go on a divorce if there are some problems that they could not solve together.