3-53th Homework

Hello there [이름]!

Thanks for doing your homework.

I think success is a very bad motivator.

I discovered years ago that people learn more from their mistakes and failures.

Sure it is painful but I think this is the reason why the lesson imprints on us because it leaves a mark.

Anyhow, this is my opinion in this matter.

I hope you are doing great.

See you on Tuesday.

Take care.

~Teacher C[이름]

Humans always want to carry out his task when they have a responsibility on the task.

>> Humans always want to carry out their task when they have a responsibility on the task.
At the start, we begin to set up the schedule for successfully doing his task.

>> At the start, we begin to set up the schedule in successfully doing our task.
Sometimes, we face several obstacles or several hardnesses.

>> Sometimes, we face several obstacles or several hardships.
Sometimes, we enchant over our good outcomes.

>> Sometimes, we are enchanted over our good outcomes.
As I previously said, there are too many things during doing our task.

>> As I previously said, there are too many things that happen while doing our task.
The thing that we can learn from the situation is how to solve the problems and how to manage the hardness without discouraging.

>> The thing that we can learn from the situation is how to solve the problems and how to manage the hardships without being discouraged.
I think it is the best thing that we learn from there.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I think this is the best lesson we learn.
Discouraging is the shortcut of the failure.

>> Discouragement is the shortcut of failure.
Even if there are a lot of obstacles in our tasks, if we don\'t discourage, we can reach the end finally.

>> Even if there are a lot of obstacles in our tasks, if we don\'t get discouraged, we can reach the end finally.
Even if the result is not good, but we could learn the lesson from there.

>> Even if the result is not good we could learn the lesson from there.
Nobody wants to fail on his task, and Nobody could not be always success.

>> Nobody wants to fail on his task but nobody succeeds all the time.
So, when we start doing something, the important thing that we must have is the tolerance over the failure.

>> So, when we start doing something, the important thing that we must have is tolerance over failure.
That is, we bear in mind that we could fail or we could succeed.

>> We should bear in mind that we could fail or we could succeed.