3-54th Homework

Good afternoon [이름]! ^_^

Thank you for writing an essay even if you are quite busy.

I think your essay was great because it was full of good thoughts and opinions.

I agree when you said productivity is very important at work.

Productivity actually gauges the efficiency of the people carrying out the project.

If the result is bad, then the workers were not productive and efficient enough.

Anyhow, I hope you\'re doing great today.

Let\'s see each other again tomorrow.

Take care at work.

~Teacher C[이름] :)

Productivity is important to work on the project.

>> Productivity is important when working on a/the project.
Its low degree is going to make some problem at the end.

>> Its low degree is going to make/create some problems at the end.
Productivity is related with the schedule of the project.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Productivity has something to do with the schedule of the project.
It is also related with the good results.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> It also has something to do with the good results.
Even if we get the result of the task, if it is not good, the productivity is low.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Even if we get the result of the task, if the result is not good then the productivity is low.
We have to work together, and then we could be taken a burden by others.

>> We have to work together and take away the burden experienced by others.
But if it is related with the productivity, we have to do it.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> But if this is related to the productivity, we have to do it.
Sometimes, there are often some people not to work in the organization.

>> Sometimes, there are some people who do not work in the organization.

OR >> There are often some people who do not work in the organization.
Productivity affects the quality of the project\'s results, after producing the goods it is related with the price.

>> Productivity affects the quality of the project\'s results but after producing the goods it is related with the price.
Good productivity lessens the charge for developing something and reduces the developing time.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> With good productivity the charge for developing something is lessened and the developing time is reduced.
If so, the goods has more competitiveness than others, and then it would be success finally.

>> If so, the goods have more competitiveness than others, and then it would finally be a success.
So, productivity is very good elements for carrying out something together.

>> So, productivity is a very good element in carrying out something together.
To do like that, we have to get a lot of conversation each other, and then the problem risen will be solved, finally.

>> To do that, we have to get a lot of conversations with each other, and then the problem that has risen will finally be solved.