3-55th homework

Hello there [이름]! ^_^

Thank you very much for having the time to answer this essay question.

I loved reading your opinions in this matter.

I agree when you said maintaining good habits is important.

It\'s probably because this will determine how far you will go in life.

It will determine whether you will be successful or not, happy or not, and fulfilled or not.

Anyhow, I learned a lot from this essay.

Thank you for writing it. :)

I hope you\'re having a great day.

See you again tomorrow.

Take care always.

~Teacher C[이름]

I think good habits would improve your all things.

>> I think good habits would improve everything in your life.
You early wake up every morning and you early go to bed every night, which it is a good habit for your health.

>>  [Do you mean]: When you wake up early in the morning, you also go to bed early every night which is a good habit for your health.
Modern humans are always lacking of a sleep, it\'s because they lately sleep every night.

>> Modern humans are always lacking of sleep. It\'s because they sleep late every night.
I think they seem to not want to change their habits.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> They don\'t seem to have a plan to change their habits.
Maybe, they seem to feel annoyed about changing their habits.

>> Maybe they feel annoyed about changing their habits.

OR >> They seem to feel annoyed about changing their habits.
In this case, if they change their bad habits, some problems would happen someday.

>> In this case, if they don\'t change their bad habits, some problems would happen someday.
But many people don\'t know about the future things, it\'s because we live in the present.

>> But many people don\'t know about the future. It\'s because we live in the present.

OR >> But many people don\'t know about the future because we live in the present.
The wise man have to prepare for the future, even if it is not affect you promptly.

>> The wise man has to prepare for the future even if it does not affect him promptly.
Normal people often ignore to try to change it.

>> Normal people often ignore changing it.
However, it is not easy to change too.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> However, changing is not easy too.
But good habits really help you to improve your health and also your finance.

>> But good habits really help you to improve your health and also your finances.
If you are very healthy, you don\'t need to go to hospital in sick, even if you go to check your status.

>> If you are very healthy, you don\'t need to go to the hospital when you\'re sick to check your status.
So, to save your money, you must have a good habit and continuously do it.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> To be able to save money, you should have a good habit and religiously do it.
It is the best for you.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> It is the best thing for you to do.