3-56th Homework

Hi, [이름]! (^_^)v

It\'s Monday again.

How are you doing so far?

Thanks for answering our essay question.

I think having a big family is great. I could say this because I have a lot of relatives.

It\'s fun but sometimes, it\'s not practical because of the expenses.

During the agricultural era, people wanted to have a lot of kids because they needed manpower in the fields.

But since we are now in industrial era, most people don\'t need to work in the fields anymore.

In addition to that, the cost of living now is much higher that\'s why having more kids is not a good or a practical thing.

Anyhow, that is my point-of-view in this matter.

I hope you\'re doing great.

See you tomorrow. ^_^

~Teacher C[이름]

Basically, I wanted to get more children but I could not do it.

>> Basically, I wanted to have more children but I could not do it.
It\'s because I married lately, so my wife didn\'t have biologically a good body to birth more children.

>> [Do you mean]: It\'s because I married late so my wife was not strong enough to bear more children.

I think it is one reason of many reason that modern parents don\'t have many children.

>> I think it is one of the many reasons why modern parents don\'t have many children.
We have to graduate school more later than one hundred year ago.

>> We have to graduate from school much later than one hundred years ago.
And it is related with getting job, and we don\'t have a lot of money to get married with someone.

>> And it is related with getting a job but we don\'t have a lot of money to get married with someone.
It\'s because we live in the capitalism but in the agricultural era.

>> It\'s because we live in capitalism but in the agricultural era.
Money is very important things to live in this environment.

>> Money is very important to live/survive in this environment.
So, having only one or two children is not their will but their choice that they could not choose from.

>> So, having only one or two children is not their will. It\'s because they have no choice.

OR >> So, having only one or two children is not their choice. It\'s because they have no other options.

Many people want to live with many family members, but it is not easy.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Many people want to have a lot of children/kids but it is not easy.
They have to spend a lot of money to take care of members, for example, education, food, and house.

>> They have to spend a lot of money to take care of the members. Some examples of expenses would be: education, food, and house.
To do all things in this era, we maybe need a lot of money.

>> To do all things in this era, we may need a lot of money.
The one thine we can do it is to live in the forest without electric and education.

>> The one thing that we can do it is to live in the forest without electricity and education.
If so, we could live without money.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> If so, it\'s okay to live without money.