3-57th homework

Hello, [이름]! ^_^

Thank you for answering our essay question for today and doing your best to write a great essay.

I love your sentences and your answers.

I think many people don\'t care about the environment.

Last weekend, I went to the seaside and witnessed first hand how irresponsible people are in keeping the environment clean.

They threw plastic cups, bottles and plates everywhere.

It was very disappointing and disgusting.

I was completely annoyed.

I don\'t know if the next generation would still have the chance to see how beautiful mother nature is.

Anyhow, I wish the time capsule exists so the next generation would still experience having fresh water and air.

I hope you\'re doing great.

See you again on Thursday.

~Teacher C[이름] :)

It\'s very interesting.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> This question is very interesting.
If I choose one item from 21th century to place in a time capsule, I would like to take some water or fresh air.

>> If I choose one item from the 21st century to place in a time capsule, I would like to take some water or fresh air.

I think the environment where we live is getting worse and worse as time goes.

>> I think the environment where we live in is getting worse and worse as time goes by.
Someday, our descendant might not drink fresh water or not breathe fresh air, if we don\'t care about the earth.

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OR >> Someday, our descendants might not be able to drink fresh water or not breathe fresh air, if we don\'t start caring for our environment.
So, I want to choose the fresh air or fresh water to place in the time capsule.

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OR >> That is why I chose the fresh air or fresh water to place in the time capsule.
Recently, we are annoyed from the dirty air and water.

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OR >> We recently felt annoyed because of the dirty air and water.
So, I could not see the stars in the sky at night even if there are any clouds.

>> So, I could not see the stars in the sky at night even if there aren\'t any clouds.
It\'s because of the polluted air and many lights in the night.

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OR >> This is because of the air pollution and the light pollution that we have at night. 

When I was young, I could easily see the galaxy in my yard but now it\'s impossible.

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OR >> When I was young, I could clearly see the night sky in my yard but now it\'s impossible.
Whenever I go to the countryside, I look up the sky to see the stars but it\'s also very difficult for lights in the road.

>> Whenever I go to the countryside, I look up the sky to see the stars but it\'s also very difficult because of the lights on the road.
Fresh air and fresh water are very important for all creatures to live on the earth, but humans don\'t care about it until now.

>> Fresh air and fresh water are very important for all creatures to live on earth, but humans don\'t care about it until now.
Recently, many people are being recognizing its importance.

>> Recently, many people are recognizing its importance.