3-58th Homework

Hi, [이름]! ^_^

How\'s your day going? I hope you\'re not too busy. :)

Thanks for promptly writing an essay for today.

I think teaching children to be financially responsible is very important.

Instead of teaching them the value of working hard all the time, I think it\'s more important to teach them how to work smart.

I agree when you said that children should learn how to create financial plans when it comes to their money because they will carry this value until they become adults.

Anyhow, that is my opinion in this matter.

I hope you\'re doing great.

See you again tomorrow. ^_^

~Teacher C[이름]

The money is an essential tool for living in the modern society with a pleasure.

>> Money is an essential tool to live pleasurably in the modern society.
In our country there is some maxim about the money.

>> In our country there is a maxim about money.
If someone have an experience for dealing with a lot of money, he could make a lot of money.

>> If someone has an experience on dealing with a lot of money, he could make a lot of money.
In my case, I didn\'t deal with a lot of money, so when I try to invest for something, it\'s very annoying to me.

>> In my case, I didn\'t deal with a lot of money, so when I tried to invest on something, it\'s very annoying to me.
I think that from younger age if someone try to use the money even if it is not useless, he would learn a lot from it.

>> [Do you mean]: I think that from a young age, if someone tries to use money on worthy things, he would learn a lot from it.
So, I think that giving the allowance to their children is very useful even if there are no labors.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> So, I think giving allowance to their children is very useful even if there are no labors.
I don\'t think the allowance must become a cost for children\'s efforts.

>> I don\'t think the allowance must become a reward for children\'s efforts.
I think the important thing is how to use the money having a responsibility.

>> [Do you mean]: I think the important thing is knowing how to use money.

If they don\'t have any plan to spend the money, the money would disappear promptly.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> If they don\'t have a plan on how to spend money, the money would disappear immediately.
After having an experience, they would feel something about the money.

>> After having an experience, they would feel something about money.
However, the rule that parents have to keep is not to give the additional money after children spent their money without any plan.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> On the other hand, the rule that parents should keep is not to give additional money after their children have spent their money without any plan.