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I usually eat lunch at 12:30 pm with my co-workers.
My office has a cafeteria for empoyees.
There are many Korean menu.
So, I can eat a lot of Korean foods everyday
Also it is free to empoyees.
I like Wednesday because Wednesday's menu is the best to me.
Sometimes I go out with my co-workers for lunch. I have to go dutch with them.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
I like how you describe what you do. Some reminders:
1. Check your spelling.
example: employees
2. The modifier should agree with the noun it modifies.
example: many Korean menus
3. \'Food\' is a non-countable noun when it refers to food in general. When discussing specific foods, for example, different national cuisines, or a listing of various foods in a person\'s diet, \'foods\' is countable.
Teacher Venus^^
I usually eat lunch at 12:30 pm with my co-workers.
>>>CORRECT
My office has a cafeteria for empoyees.
>>>My office has a cafeteria for employees.There are many Korean menu.
>>>There are many Korean menus.So, I can eat a lot of Korean foods everyday
>>>So, I can eat a lot of Korean food everyday.Also it is free to empoyees.>>>Also it is free for employees.
I like Wednesday because Wednesday\'s menu is the best to me.
>>>CORRECTSometimes I go out with my co-workers for lunch.
>>>CORRECT
I have to go dutch with them.
>>>CORRECT
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