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2015-08-25 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

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I usually eat lunch at 12:30 pm with my co-workers. My office has a cafeteria for empoyees. There are many Korean menu. So, I can eat a lot of Korean foods everyday Also it is free to empoyees. I like Wednesday because Wednesday's menu is the best to me. Sometimes I go out with my co-workers for lunch. I have to go dutch with them.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!   I like how you describe what you do. Some reminders: 1. Check your spelling. example: employees 2. The modifier should agree with the noun it modifies. example: many Korean menus 3. \'Food\' is a non-countable noun when it refers to food in general. When discussing specific foods, for example, different national cuisines, or a listing of various foods in a person\'s diet, \'foods\' is countable.   Teacher Venus^^   I usually eat lunch at 12:30 pm with my co-workers. >>>CORRECT My office has a cafeteria for empoyees. >>>My office has a cafeteria for employees.There are many Korean menu. >>>There are many Korean menus.So, I can eat a lot of Korean foods everyday >>>So, I can eat a lot of Korean food everyday.Also it is free to empoyees.>>>Also it is free for employees. I like Wednesday because Wednesday\'s menu is the best to me. >>>CORRECTSometimes I go out with my co-workers for lunch. >>>CORRECT I have to go dutch with them. >>>CORRECT

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