3-59th Homework

Hello there [이름]!

How\'s your day?

I hope you\'re doing great and you\'re not too busy.

Thanks for taking the time to write in our composition board today.

I think co-ed schools are good because students are taught to build a harmonious relationship with the opposite gender.

Aside from that, the academic skills could also increase.

I\'ve studied in co-ed schools from kindergarten until college and I think it was great.

Anyhow, I will see you again tomorrow.

Take care.

~Teacher C[이름]

I didn\'t know that all-girl schools has been gaining popularity in recent years.

>> I didn\'t know that all-girl schools have been gaining popularity in recent years.
In Korea, many schools have been changed into mixed-schools that boys and girls go to school together.
>> In Korea, many schools have been changed into mixed-schools so that boys and girls could go to school together.
Many people think that mixed-schools have more advantages than all-girl or all-boy schools.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> A lot of people think that mixed-schools have more advantages than all-girl or all-boy schools.
The middle school that I went to was the all-boy school.

>> The middle school that I went to was an all-boy school.
So, there were only boys in the school.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> So, the students were all boys.
At that time, we very envied the friends who went to a mixed-school.

>> At that time, we very envious of our friends who went to a mixed-school.

OR >> At that time, we very envious of our friends who went to a co-ed school.

Even if we want to meet a girl, we could not make the chance it.

>> Even if we want to meet a girl, we could not make the chance.
Anyway, at that time the school that was made newly was almost mixed-schools in my remember.

>> [Do you mean]: Anyway, at that time, I remember that there were mixed-schools 

There were some reasons for making like that.

>> There were some reasons for making it like that.
First, if there were boys and girls in the same class, someone believed that the study capability would be increased.

>> First, if there were boys and girls in the same class, someone believed that the studying capability would be increased.

It\'s because boys and girls want to be shown more smarter than other boys and girls each other.

>> [Do you mean]: It\'s because boys and girls want to show that they are smarter than the other boys and girls in the class.
Second, if there were boys and girls in the same class, it would be smooth in the relationship between boys and girls.

>> Second, if there were boys and girls in the same class, there would smoother relationship between boys and girls.