3-5th Homework

I don't care whether we admire heroes or celebrities. There is some reason for celebrities to be shown in the TV or for heroes to be heard among people. The points that I focus on are their abilities. They have a certain ability that normal persons don't have. So, they are called as heroes or celebrities by us. I think it is not important whether we should admire them or not. Sometimes, we found the fact that all of them was not real heroes or celebrities, actually it was made by mass media and it was just a fiction. But we can also learn from there even if it is not true. Anyway, they have a specific ability which we don't have. We have to catch it to upgrade me. in many cases, we often criticize them as finding their faults without considering their persistent efforts. It's not a fair. So, before criticizing them, we have to think about our efforts to do something. If we think about that, we could not easily criticize them. Maybe, all would admire them. To find a merit is important.

Hi, [이름]! (^_^) Congratulations for doing such a wonderful job in your composition today. I am really impressed. ^__^ I hope this progress would be continuous. Anyhow, I agree that it does not matter whether the people we admire are hereor or celebrities. The mere fact that they are famous means that they did something remarkable that\'s why they are well-known. You\'re right. Instead of choosing who to admire, we should make an effort to copy their positive traits and be a hero or a celebrity in our own ways. Thank you for this great composition [이름]. I\'ll see you again tomorrow. Take care and God bless. ~Teacher C[이름] :) I don\'t care whether we admire heroes or celebrities. >> CORRECT! OR >> It\'s really not a problem for me whether we admire heroes or celebrities. There is some reason for celebrities to be shown in the TV or for heroes to be heard among people. >> CORRECT! OR >> There is a reason why celebrities are shown on TV or why the stories of heroes are shared among people. The points that I focus on are their abilities. >> CORRECT! OR >> I am focusing on their abilities. They have a certain ability that normal persons don\'t have. >> CORRECT! OR >> They possess a quality that normal people don\'t posses. So, they are called as heroes or celebrities by us. >> CORRECT! OR >> So, we call them heroes or celebrities. I think it is not important whether we should admire them or not. >> CORRECT! OR >> I think admiring them or not is not that important. Sometimes, we found the fact that all of them was not real heroes or celebrities, actually it was made by mass media and it was just a fiction. >> Sometimes, we find the fact that all of them are not real heroes or celebrities, but are only made up by mass media and it is just a fiction. But we can also learn from there even if it is not true. >> CORRECT! OR >> But we can also learn from it even if it is just fictional. Anyway, they have a specific ability which we don\'t have. >> CORRECT! OR >> Anyway, they have a specific ability which most of us don\'t have. We have to catch it to upgrade me. >> We have to acquire it to upgrade ourselves. in many cases, we often criticize them as finding their faults without considering their persistent efforts. >> In many cases, we often criticize them and find their faults without considering their persistent efforts. It\'s not a fair. >> It\'s not fair. So, before criticizing them, we have to think about our efforts to do something. >> CORRECT! OR >> That\'s why before criticizing them, we have to think about our efforts when doing something. If we think about that, we could not easily criticize them. >> CORRECT! OR >> If we give it a thought, it won\'t be easy for us to criticize them. Maybe, all would admire them. >> CORRECT! OR >> All people would probably admire them. To find a merit is important. >> CORRECT! OR >> Finding merit in something is important.