3.6/3.7 homework
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3.6 homework
I want to visit Thailand. Because when i see Thai drama, the actress and actors acting is so adorable. And their accent is so cute. And i see youtube who live in Thailand they are so comfortabe and funny. That’s reason i want to visit Thailand.
3.7 homework
If my feel good, l express my feel. Because i think if i have good feel the energy is spread many people.
But if my feel is not good, i keep it in. That’s why opposite reason.
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Please take note to always use capital letter \"I\".
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3.6 homework
I want to visit Thailand. Because when i see Thai drama, the actress and actors acting is so adorable.
>> I want to visit Thailand, because the actresses and actors in Thai dramas are adorable.
And their accent is so cute.
>> Correct!
OR: Their accent is also adorable.
OR: Their accent is also adorable.
And i see youtube who live in Thailand they are so comfortabe and funny.
>> And I see people on YouTube from Thailand who are both comfortable and funny.
That’s reason i want to visit Thailand.
>> That is why I want to travel to Thailand.
3.7 homework
If my feel good, l express my feel.
>> If I\'m feeling good, I\'ll express it.
Because i think if i have good feel the energy is spread many people.
>> Because I think having a positive attitude spreads energy to others.
But if my feel is not good, i keep it in.
>> But if I don\'t feel okay, I keep it in.
That’s why opposite reason.
>> That is why there is an opposite reason.
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