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I like to go to the department store called AK department store. Also I like to go when there is a bargain or sales. It is located far a way from my house. So when I visit there, I have to drive my car. I usually buy some clothes for my children. My husband always buy some clothes for himself. I always go shopping after I have lunch and then I can lose my weight. It is my shopping tip.

Hello [이름]!   You are really learning a lot.  Just don\'t forget to give more explanations to make your point clear. For example: I always go shopping after I have lunch. I walk a lot when I go shopping to lose some weight. Teacher Venus^^   I like to go to the department store called AK department store. >>>I like to go to the department store called AK Department Store. Also I like to go when there is a bargain or sales. >>>Also I like to go when there is a bargain or sale.It is located far a way from my house. >>>It is located far away from my house. So when I visit there, I have to drive my car. >>>CORRECTI usually buy some clothes for my children. >>>CORRECTMy husband always buy some clothes for himself.>>>CORRECT I always go shopping after I have lunch and then I can lose my weight. >>>better: I always go shopping after I have lunch. I walk a lot when I go shopping to lose some weight.It is my shopping tip. >>>CORRECT