3/6 homework

2018-03-06 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

학생이 쓴 원문

If I have an opportunity to bring any person from the past, I want to bring my grandmother to my mother. Before I got married, I didn't realize how much important mother to our live. After marriage, I often feel I want to meet my mother and I can understand my mother more deeply. After my grandmother was gone, my mother occasionally said she want to me her mother. I love both of my parents. However, most daughters have a relationship their mother like best friends after being adult. I want to back my mother's best friend to her, if I can.

강사 첨삭

Thank you for writing this [이름].

Make sure to always find some time for your parents. So that you\'ll never have any regrets.

I lost my mom at a young age and now I always regret I never get to spend quality time with her.

Anyway, I hope you\'re going to have more wonderful time with your parents.

See you tomorrow.

~Teacher Shanee^^,


If I have an opportunity to bring any person from the past, I want to bring my grandmother to my mother. 

>>> Correct!
Before I got married, I didn\'t realize how much important mother to our live. 

>>> Before I got married, I didn\'t realize how much our mother is important.
After marriage, I often feel I want to meet my mother and I can understand my mother more deeply. 

>>> OR: After getting married, I often feel I want to meet my mother and I can now understand my mother more deeply.
After my grandmother was gone, my mother occasionally said she want to me her mother. 

>>> After my grandmother was gone, my mother occasionally said she wants to meet her mother.
I love both of my parents. 

>>> Correct!
However, most daughters have a relationship their mother like best friends after being adult. 

>>> However, daughters have a closer relationship like that of best friends with their mother when they turn adults.
I want to back my mother\'s best friend to her, if I can.

>>> I want to bring back my mother\'s best friend to her if I can.

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