3/6 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Thank you for writing this [이름].
Make sure to always find some time for your parents. So that you\'ll never have any regrets.
I lost my mom at a young age and now I always regret I never get to spend quality time with her.
Anyway, I hope you\'re going to have more wonderful time with your parents.
See you tomorrow.
~Teacher Shanee^^,
If I have an opportunity to bring any person from the past, I want to bring my grandmother to my mother.
>>> Correct!
Before I got married, I didn\'t realize how much important mother to our live.
>>> Before I got married, I didn\'t realize how much our mother is important.
After marriage, I often feel I want to meet my mother and I can understand my mother more deeply.
>>> OR: After getting married, I often feel I want to meet my mother and I can now understand my mother more deeply.
After my grandmother was gone, my mother occasionally said she want to me her mother.
>>> After my grandmother was gone, my mother occasionally said she wants to meet her mother.
I love both of my parents.
>>> Correct!
However, most daughters have a relationship their mother like best friends after being adult.
>>> However, daughters have a closer relationship like that of best friends with their mother when they turn adults.
I want to back my mother\'s best friend to her, if I can.
>>> I want to bring back my mother\'s best friend to her if I can.
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