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2019-03-06 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

학생이 쓴 원문

I think it has both sides as negative and positive effects. I heard that some women lived with her boyfriend before deciding to get married. But, he is very dirty and didn\'t any housework. She said he was a good boyfriend, but he will not be a good husband. If she didn\'t live with him, he will get married to him, and we don\'t know she will regret or not. In this case, living before marriage looks like reasonable. However, I know we have to make a balance with each other after getting married. My husband and me, we had separated life for almost 30 years. After then, we got married, and we fought due to the different lifestyle and sometimes personal characteristics. If we are just lived as a girlfriend and boyfriend, we don\'t need to endure and fight. Breaking up is a very simple way. I think living with a boyfriend and husband is absolutely different. And, I am maturing after getting married, my husband too.

강사 첨삭

Wow! Thanks [이름] for accomplishing your homework before travelling to Japan! ^ ^ I appreciate your consistency and effort in practicing and learning the language! ^ ^

Thanks for your thoughts on this one. You know what they say; \"different strokes for different folks\". The \"living together\" may not seem acceptable in our society or not in the normal social norm especially for Asians. But, I guess it\'s also practical in a sense. You can avoid having a divorce or being with a person that makes your life miserable.  ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah


I think it has both sides as negative and positive effects.

>>I think it has both it\'s negative and positive effects.
I heard that some women lived with her boyfriend before deciding to get married.

>>I heard that there was a woman who lived with her boyfriend before deciding to get married. 
But, he is very dirty and didn\'t any housework.

>>But, he was very dirty and didn\'t help with any of the housework. 
She said he was a good boyfriend, but he will not be a good husband.

>>Correct
If she didn\'t live with him, he will get married to him, and we don\'t know she will regret or not.

>>If she didn\'t live with him, and she will get married to him, we don\'t know if she will regret it or not.
In this case, living before marriage looks like reasonable.

>>In this case, living together before marriage looks reasonable.
However, I know we have to make a balance with each other after getting married.

>>However, I know we have to balance life after getting married. 
My husband and me, we had separated life for almost 30 years.

>>My husband and me, we lived different lives for almost 30 years.
After then, we got married, and we fought due to the different lifestyle and sometimes personal characteristics.

>>When we got married, we fought a lot because of difference in lifestyle and character.
If we are just lived as a girlfriend and boyfriend, we don\'t need to endure and fight.

>>If we stayed together only as girlfriend and boyfriend, we don\'t need to endure nor fight each other.
Breaking up is a very simple way.

>>Correct
I think living with a boyfriend and husband is absolutely different.

>>Correct 
And, I am maturing after getting married, my husband too.

>>Correct 

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