3-60th Homework

Hi, [이름]!

Thanks for writing in our composition board today.

Your sentences are getting longer and I\'m so happy.

Good job my friend! ^_^

I think planning and trying out a solution are both important when dealing with problems.

This is very much the same with having a back up plan.

The solution is plan A but if the solution doesn\'t work you should have a plan B.

That\'s where the importance of planning sets in.

For me, trying a solution without a back up plan is not good because you could end up wasting a lot of time.

Anyhow, that is my opinion in this matter.

I hope you\'re doing great.

See you on Thursday.

~Teacher C[이름] ^_^

When we face with a problem, nobody wants to leave it.

>> [Do you mean]: When we face a problem, most of us don\'t want to quit.
So, many people try to find a solution until they find it.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> So, many of us do our best to look for the solution to our problems.
I think there are several merits or several faults in doing like that.

>> I think there are several merits or several faults in doing that.
The merits we can think are promptly to solve the problem without any restrictions. So, the progress of the project would keep going smoothly.

>> The merit we can think of is to promptly solve the problem without any restrictions so the progress of the project would keep going smoothly.
But if we could not find out it for a long time, it would make another problem, that is, a schedule.

>> [Do you mean]: But if we are only able to see the future, we would know that another problem will arise and that is the schedule.

So, when we solve such a problem, if we set up the schedule for solving, it would be more better.

>> So, when we solve such a problem and set up the schedule in solving it, it would be better.
In my case, I first try to solve it for a certain time.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> In my situation, I try to solve it first for a certain time.
And then if I found that I could not solve the problem, I would try to distract it away from my thought.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> if I realize that I could not solve the problem, I would try to not think about it.
It\'s because I want to relief my brain from the stresses.

>> It\'s because I want to relieve my brain from the stresses.
After a while, you might find the solution.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> After some time, you might be able to find the solution.
In my case, I have an experience like that, so I recommend.

>> In my case, I have experienced that, so I recommend it.
The problem always happens while we work with colleagues together.

>> The problem always happens while we work together with our colleagues.
So you have to be naturally taken it, don\'t take a stress.

>> [Do you mean]: So you have to be natural about it and not take on too much stress.
If so, it would be good.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> If this is the case then it would be great.