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2011-05-04 · 첨삭 강사 Christine

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Q: What would you like to change in yourself? I don't want to change in myself because I really love me. Of course I wish to more beauty and smart also thin. but I have to satisfaction as just me. If I don't like me who like me ? I just hope improve my intuitive ability by cultivating a worry-free and fear-free state of mind and I would be happy no fear to life.

강사 첨삭

[이름].. you do not know how much I am thankful for having the chance of meeting you. You are one of a kind and anybody would be lucky to have you in their life.. ^^,   Q: What would you like to change in yourself? >> Correct!I don't want to change in myself because I really love me. >> I do not want to change anything in myself because I love myself.Of course I wish to more beauty and smart also thin. but I have to satisfaction as just me. >> Of course, I wish to be more beautiful, smarter and thinner, but I am satisfied by just being me.If I don't like me who like me ? >> If I will not love myself, who else will love me?I just hope improve my intuitive ability by cultivating a worry-free and fear-free state of mind and I would be happy no fear to life. >> I just hope to improve on my intuitive ability by cultivating a worry-free and fearless state of mind.

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