3-61th Homework

Hello there [이름]! ^_^

It\'s a rainy but nevertheless great Thursday isn\'t it?

Thank you for writing in our composition board today.

I enjoyed reading your opinions in this matter.

I think adults especially parents are indeed responsible for children being overweight these days.

It\'s because the adults are the ones who prepare their food.

They say that you are what you eat and I think this is true.

Anyhow, I hope you\'re having a great day.

Stay warm, dry, happy and safe.

See you tomorrow.

~Teacher C[이름] :)

Being overweight always can make several problems in human body whether one is an adult or not.

>> Being overweight can always make several problems in the human body whether one is an adult or not.
Many years ago I heard that when someone was young, if one was overweight, after being an adult, the probability that one can become overweight would be higher than others who was not overweight.

>> Many years ago, I heard that when someone was young and overweight, after being an adult, the probability that one can become overweight would be higher than others who were not overweight.
It\'s because the cell of overweight in one\'s body would be dominated.

>> [Do you mean]: It\'s because the cells of an overweight person are used to too much food.

Of course, there are other reasons to be overweight, for example, genetic affect, eating habits, etc.

>> Of course, there are other reasons for being overweight. Some reasons would include, genes and eating habits.

Anyway, if you want to avoid being overweight, I think the eating habits would be very important.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Anyway, if you want to avoid being overweight you have be careful with your eating habits.

Everybody has a special characteristics including eating habits.

>> Everybody has special characteristics including eating habits.
The favorite things depending on people would be variety.

>> [Do you mean]: The things that people like are various.
Someone like this but others don\'t like it.

>> Someone likes this but others don\'t like it.
I think if there are many cases in exposing with strange foods, the reluctance would not be severe.

>> I think if there are many cases in exposing people to strange foods, the reluctance would not be severe.
The main reason of being overweight may overeat over and over without any outdoor activities.

>> The main reason for being overweight is over eating without any outdoor activities.
If you could not stop eating foods, you have to actively exercise for you.

>> If you could not stop eating foods, you have to actively exercise for your own sake.