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Q3: What is your favorite brand of clothing or dress? What do you think are the famous fashion styles this spring season.
My favorite brand of clothing showing is womanly dress like Plastic island and Zara. I think dress is suit for all women whoever wear this.
A dress make me look very feminine and comfortable.
so I have so many various dress and of course spring season.
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Q3: What is your favorite brand of clothing or dress? What do you think are the famous fashion styles this spring season.
>> Q3: What is your favorite brand of clothing or dress? What do you think are the famous fashion styles this spring season?
My favorite brand of clothing showing is womanly dress like Plastic island and Zara.
>> My favorite brand of woman clothing show is like Plastic Island and Zara.
I think dress is suit for all women whoever wear this.
>> I think their dress will suit all women whoever will wear it.
A dress make me look very feminine and comfortable.
>> A dress makes me look very feminine and comfortable.
so I have so many various dress and of course spring season.
>> So I have so various dresses because it's spring season.
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