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IT'S ALL ABOUT CAMPING!
What is the best activity to do while camping?
-It's eat meet, and sing song
How many times have you gone camping? Did you enjoy it?
-It was once camping. Hmm... no, i don't like camping
Where have you gone camping?
-I where forgot gone.
What are the 4 most important things to bring when you go camping?
-tent, food, cellphone, flashlight, Insect repellent
Where is the best place to go camping in your country?
-I don't know...
강사 첨삭
Hey [이름]! How are you my dear? It seems like you don\'t like camping, do you? I understand, we all have different experiences about a certain event in our lives but when the time that you have another camping try to look for the good things it may bring you. Anyway, your sentences here are clear. The thoughts you share are sensible. Keep it up and keep on practicing! I am very proud of you because you are improving...really.. So do not give up! We are always here to guide you! I\'ll see you again! Missin yah!!
IT\'S ALL ABOUT CAMPING!What is the best activity to do while camping?-It\'s eat meet, and sing song>>> YOU CAN SAY: The best thing to do while camping is to eat meat and sing a song!
How many times have you gone camping? Did you enjoy it?-It was once camping. Hmm... no, i don\'t like camping>>> I had tried camping once but I didn\'t like it.
Where have you gone camping?-I where forgot gone.>>> I already forgot it.
What are the 4 most important things to bring when you go camping?-tent, food, cellphone, flashlight, Insect repellent>>> The 4 things to bring when you go to camping would be a tent, food, a cellphone, a flashlight and an insect repellent.
Where is the best place to go camping in your country?-I don\'t know...
>>> CORRECT.
OR: I don\'t have any idea.
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