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Hello Ms. [이름],
Very well said, Ms. [이름]. Promises should be kept. If you can\'t keep it, you shouldn\'t have given your promise. Have a great day at work! See you in class!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
It is very important to live with many neighbors and co-workers.
>>correct!
I think regardless of age, all people become responsible for their actions.
>>I think regardless of age, all people should be responsible for their actions.
So since childhood, we have to keep the promise and before the actions, we have to think with much time.
>>So even children should keep their promises and we should think before doing anything.
Your message is an impressive to me.
>>Your message is impressive to me.
It makes me a lively day.
>>It makes me lively everyday.
Thanks.
>>correct!
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