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2016-10-07 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

학생이 쓴 원문

I sometimes envy my eldest daughter. If I can go back to the past, I really want to go back my teens. I must study very hard, I must do wrong things because when I was teenager, I was very a good girl. so, for example, I would go to the club dispite I am student. And then, I would visit a lot of countries with my friends. I would buy expensive clothes and bags. I would spend money for myself. Hmmm.. I have to understand my daughter. I know. However I am a mother now. I always worry about her.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Ms. [이름]!

But then if you can go back to the past and do all the things you haven\'t tried, you\'ll be happy but what about your parents? You said you are a mom now so would you understand if your daughter will go to clubs and spend a lot of money on herself? I\'m just wondering. See you on Monday!

Take care!

~T. Lynn

I sometimes envy my eldest daughter.

>> correct!
If I can go back to the past, I really want to go back my teens.

>> If I can go back to the past, I really want to go back when I was a teenager.
I must study very hard, I must do wrong things because when I was teenager, I was very a good girl.

>> I must study very hard, do some bad things since I was a very good girl when I was a teenager.
so, for example, I would go to the club dispite I am student.

>> So, for example, I will go to the club even if I am still a student.
And then, I would visit a lot of countries with my friends.

>> correct!
I would buy expensive clothes and bags.

>> correct!
I would spend money for myself.

>> correct!
Hmmm.. I have to understand my daughter. I know.

>> correct!
However, I am a mother now.

>> correct!
I always worry about her.

>> correct!

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