3-6th Homework

2016-11-11 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

학생이 쓴 원문

Friendship has some good point to help get a relationship. So, many business man want to get a relationship and want to retain the relation that have been taken once. Actually, friendship is to continuously show your trust to others. Finally, if you want to get help from others or if you want to get an advantage from others, it play an important role as they can trust you. We always make the relationship with neighborhood even if he is unknown. This is a real life. So, friendship and relationship are very common actions in the society. I think these actions is the base of the society to concrete more. Of course, there are several side-effects. Therefore, we are humans who have a fault. Even if there are side-effects in the relationship, it is not enough big to give up the merits of the relationships. So, I agree to Wilson's talk. And I think the good relationship and friendship is made by trusting each other. If there is some crack on the trust, the friendship would be no more.

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Hi, [이름]! ^__^ How\'s your day so far? I hope it\'s not too cold out there. Thank you for doing your homework. I agree that trust is the foundation of a good friendship and relationship. Without trust, they won\'t hold together. A relationship or friendship without trust is fake or ingenuine. Anyhow, thank you for doing your best to make good sentences. Keep it up! See you again next week. Take care and God bless. ^_^ ~Teacher C[이름] Friendship has some good point to help get a relationship. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: Friendship has some good points in helping achieve a good relationship. So, many business man want to get a relationship and want to retain the relation that have been taken once. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: So, many businessmen want to have a good relationship with their associates and retain that relationship. Actually, friendship is to continuously show your trust to others. >> Actually, friendship means to continuously show your trust to others. Finally, if you want to get help from others or if you want to get an advantage from others, it play an important role as they can trust you. >> Finally, if you want to get help from others or if you want to get an advantage from others, trust will play an important role. We always make the relationship with neighborhood even if he is unknown. >> We always establish a good relationship with our neighbor even if he/she is unfamiliar to us. This is a real life. >> CORRECT! OR >> This is what happens in real life. So, friendship and relationship are very common actions in the society. >> CORRECT! OR >> That\'s why establishing a friendship and relationship are very common in our society. I think these actions is the base of the society to concrete more. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: I think these actions serve as the base of a stronger society. Of course, there are several side-effects. >> CORRECT! OR >> Of course, these have several effects. Therefore, we are humans who have a fault. >> CORRECT! OR >> Therefore, we as humans are imperfect. Even if there are side-effects in the relationship, it is not enough big to give up the merits of the relationships. >> Even if there are side-effects in the relationship, it is not enough to give up the merits of that relationship. So, I agree to Wilson\'s talk. >> So, I agree to Wilson\'s statement. And I think the good relationship and friendship is made by trusting each other. >> And I think a good relationship and friendship are made by trusting each other. If there is some crack on the trust, the friendship would be no more. >> If there is some crack on the trust, the friendship would be gone.

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