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My favorite park is Han River PARK.
It is a city park located along the Han River in Seoul.
The park is very beautiful.
There are many trees and flowers in the park.
Also, the park has a bicycle path and exercise equipment.
At the park, people have picnics and walk along the riverside.
The park is popular with both children and adults.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
You did well again. Just remember your capitalization.
Teacher Venus^^
My favorite park is Han River PARK.
>>>My favorite park is Han River Park.
It is a city park located along the Han River in Seoul.
>>>CORRECT
The park is very beautiful.
>>>CORRECT
There are many trees and flowers in the park.
>>>CORRECT
Also, the park has a bicycle path and exercise equipment.
>>>CORRECT
At the park, people have picnics and walk along the riverside.
>>>At the park, people have picnics. They also walk along the riverside.
The park is popular with both children and adults.
>>>CORRECT
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