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학생이 쓴 원문
I said before, I want to go back in time to meet my parent.
I want to tell them I love you and I can't forget your love for me.
I also want to tell them I am sorry I didn't know your love while you live.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [이름]!
Often times people don\'t realize the importance of someone until they are gone. That\'s just normal but the sad thing is we cannot turn back the time.
Take care!
~T. Lynn
I said before, I want to go back in time to meet my parents.
>> correct!
I want to tell them I love you and I can\'t forget your love for me.
>> I want to tell them I love them and that I can\'t forget their love for me.
I also want to tell them I am sorry I didn\'t know your love while you live.
>> I also want to tell them I am sorry I didn\'t appreciate their love while they were alive.
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