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2017-01-16 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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In my case before I will try something, I always think and thinking again. However I made a mistake when I was in my early 20s. I hated my team leader so I quited my job because of him. I had to control my emotions. I decided to come back after one years. I never want do it again because I want to have my job and my company is my life.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Ms. [이름]!
When we were young, we did things that we regret after some time. Well, you\'ve decided to come back and now you are happy where you are so it\'s all for the best because you have learned a lesson.
Take care!
~T. Lynn
In my case before I will try something, I always think and thinking again.
>> In my case before I will try something, I always think and think again.
OR>> Before I do anything, I think it over many times.
However, I made a mistake when I was in my early 20s.
>> correct!
I hated my team leader so I quit my job because of him.
>> correct!
I had to control my emotions.
>> correct!
I decided to come back after one years.
>> I have decided to come back after one year/a year.
I never want do it again because I want to have my job and my company is my life.
>> I never want do that again because I want to have my job and stay in my company my whole life.

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