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Hi there Ms. [이름]!
I think yours is better still than ours here in the Philippines. I mean the medical health insurance provided by the government.
Take care!
~T. Lynn
What do you think about the health care system in your country? How could it be improved?
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I am working for a long time since I was in my early 20th.
>>I had been working for along time since my early 20s.
So, I had to pay medical insurance premium to my government.
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I thought it was waste of money because when I was youth, I didn\'t need to go to the hospital.
>> I thought it was waste of money because when I was young, I didn\'t need to go to the hospital.
However, after I became in my early 40th, I can check my health in free because my paying medical insurance premium.
>> However, after I enter my early 40s, I can check my health for free because I had been paying my medical insurance premium.
But it is not enough to check my health.
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Because If I get some ill, I have to pay a lot of money for myself.
>> Because If I get sick, I\'ll have to pay a lot of money for myself/hospitalization.
I can\'t believe my government so I have private health insurance.
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It is not a good way because most people feel uncomfortable like me.
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