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Hi there Ms. [이름]!(\",)
Many movies had been made about humans versus the machines. It\'s actually scary if you think about it but I believe machines/robots could never survive without humans so don\'t worry.(\",)
Take care!
~T. Lynn
In the future, many doctors and nurses don\'t need anymore. I watched that on the TV program because of Robot of doctor.
>> In the future, many doctors and nurses aren\'t needed anymore. I watched that on a TV program. This is because of Robot doctors.
I don\'t like to change it.
>> correct!
Human is very important in the future.
>> Humans are very important in the future.
Technology has to develop for human but it is not important more than human.
>> Technology has to develop for humans but it is not more important than humans.
OR>> Technological developments are very important for humans but humans are still above new technology.
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