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학생이 쓴 원문
I don't often use social networking.
Because I think it is waste of time to use social networking.
I don't have spare time.
Also I think that I have to become a diligent person to use.
However I am not diligent.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [이름]!(\",)
Well, you are right! Many people are just wasting their time on SNS. See you in class tomorrow!
Take care!(\",)
~T. Lynn
I don\'t often use social networking.
>> correct!
Because I think it is waste of time to use social networking.
>> Because I think it is a waste of time to use social networking.
I don\'t have spare time.
>> correct!
Also I think that I have to become a diligent person to use.
>> Also, I think that I have to become a diligent person to use this/it.
However I am not diligent.
>> correct!
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