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2017-06-02 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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2. Assignment A: Just a moment! I’ll be right with you. What can I get for you? B: I would like a low-fat cappuccino and fresh squeezed orange juice please. A: Oh sorry, we just ran out of the orange. We still have apples left though. B; In that case, I’ll take the apple juice. A: Would you like to anything else? B: I’ll have a slim sandwich and yogurt. A: I’m sorry we have only low-fat yogurt now. B: It sounds good for me. I have been going on a diet. I’ll take it, A: Okay, I’ll be right back.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Heidi!(\",)

Finally, you are done with your homework or are there more?

Take care!

~T. Lynn

2. Assignment
A: Just a moment! I’ll be right with you. What can I get for you?

>> correct!
B: I would like a low-fat cappuccino and fresh squeezed orange juice please.

>> correct!
A: Oh sorry, we just ran out of the orange. We still have apples left though.

>> A: Oh sorry, we just ran out of orange juice. We still have apples left though.
B; In that case, I’ll take the apple juice.

>> correct!
A: Would you like to anything else?

>> A: Would you like anything else?
B: I’ll have a slim sandwich and yogurt.

>> correct!
A: I’m sorry, we have only low-fat yogurt now.

>> correct!

OR>> A: I’m sorry, we have only low-fat yogurt left.
B: It sounds good for me. I have been going on a diet. I’ll take it,

>> B: It sounds good to me. I have been going on a diet. I’ll take it.

OR>>B: It\'s okay. I\'m on a diet anyway. I’ll take it.
A: Okay, I’ll be right back.

>> correct!

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