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2017-12-19 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

학생이 쓴 원문

When I was young, I was not a smart girl. I did not know a lot of things more than my friends. Maybe my parent was very upset because of me but they were not angry to me. However.. in my case, I am upset and I am annoyed when my children are not smart. Becoming mother is very difficult.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Ms. [이름]!(\",)

As a teacher, I believe that everyone is smart at one thing. We can\'t all be perfect and know it all. Some people might be good in Math some in Science some in languages or maybe in music but nobody can be good at everything. We have all our differences and uniqueness as well as talents. So don\'t worry too much about your daughter and give her a little room. If you get angry all the time, you\'ll grow older faster.(\",)

Take care!(\",)

~T. Lynn

When I was young, I was not a smart girl.

>> correct!
 I did not know a lot of things more than my friends.

>> I did not know a lot of things unlike my friends.
 Maybe my parent was very upset because of me but they were not angry to me. 

>> Maybe my parents were very upset because of me but they were not angry at me. 
 However.. in my case, I am upset and I am annoyed when my children are not smart.

>> correct!
 Becoming mother is very difficult.

>> Being a mother is very difficult.

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