3-7th Homework

If we want to get the good result without any efforts, it is very dangerous and it is to cheat you. There are many success people in our society. We can easily see them on a TV show. In the TV show, they usually say their experiences as they seem to easily get their goals. At this moment, we don't confuse something. That is, a result and a progress. In first time, they would not carry out their goals like us. Not like us, they devoted to reach their goals and they don't give up until carrying out, which is the difference between common people and TV stars. When we see some stars on the TV show, we just only see their results. I think their performance on the TV show is the price of the progress. If we neglect the progress while the only results are focused, finally we would easily ruin. But even if the results is not good to achieve something promptly, eventually we can make a success. It's because we learn a lot from the progress. I think there is no free without any efforts.

Hi, [이름]! ^_^ Thank you very much for doing your best to answer our essay homework for today. I think your opinions in relation to this matter are beautiful. I also agree that good results require effort and that nothing is for free in this world. The process is more important than the result. It\'s because we learn through the process and not through the result. Anyhow, I hope you are having a great day. See you again on Thursday. :)Take care. ~Teacher C[이름] If we want to get the good result without any efforts, it is very dangerous and it is to cheat you. >> If we want to get the good result without any efforts, it is very dangerous and it is a form of cheating. There are many success people in our society. >> There are many successful people in our society. We can easily see them on a TV show. >> CORRECT! OR >> We can easily see them on television. In the TV show, they usually say their experiences as they seem to easily get their goals. >> In the TV show, they usually say their experiences and they seem to easily get their goals. At this moment, we don\'t confuse something. >> At this moment, we should not be confused of something. That is, a result and a progress. >> That is, the result and the progress. In first time, they would not carry out their goals like us. >> At first, they would not carry out their goals like us. Not like us, they devoted to reach their goals and they don\'t give up until carrying out, which is the difference between common people and TV stars. >> Not like us, they devote their time to reach their goals and they don\'t give up until they carry it out. That is the difference between common people and TV stars. When we see some stars on the TV show, we just only see their results. >> When we see some stars on the TV show, we just/only see their results. I think their performance on the TV show is the price of the progress. >> I think their performance on the TV show is the price of the process/progress. If we neglect the progress while the only results are focused, finally we would easily ruin. >> If we neglect the progress and only focus on the results, we would finally easily ruin. But even if the results is not good to achieve something promptly, eventually we can make a success. >> But even if the results are not good at first, we can eventually achieve success. It\'s because we learn a lot from the progress. >> CORRECT! OR >> It\'s because we learn a lot from the process. I think there is no free without any efforts. >> I think there is nothing free and everything requires effort.