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I am working at an auto parts company called Yura Coporation.
It is located in the countryside and it was established in 1991.
It has branches in a lot of countries.
Also it has my factories in Korea.
My company's head offics is located in Seoul.
I am working at one of the factories in my company.
My office has two buildings and my company has two floors in each building.
Many containers are in front yard and many people are working everyday for exports.
My company is surrounded by many mountains.
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I am working at an auto parts company called Yura Coporation.
>>>CORRECT
It is located in the countryside and it was established in 1991.
>>>CORRECT
It has branches in a lot of countries.
>>>CORRECT
Also it has my factories in Korea.>>>Also it has many factories in Korea.
My company\'s head offics is located in Seoul.
>>>My company\'s head office is located in Seoul.I am working at one of the factories in my company.
>>>I am working in one of the factories in my company.
My office has two buildings and my company has two floors in each building.
>>>CORRECTMany containers are in front yard and many people are working everyday for exports.
>>>Many containers are in the front yard and many people are working everyday for exports.My company is surrounded by many mountains.
>>>CORRECT
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