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I can feel fresh power about starting a day.
Moreover, we gain physical and mental health through dancing.
강사 첨삭
Hey there, [이름] [이름]!
Dancer refers to a series of set of movement to music which we can either do alone or with a partner. Dancing helps us express our feelings and get active as well.
- Kristine ^^
I can feel fresh power about starting a day.
>> I feel energetic when I start my day.
Moreover, we gain physical and mental health through dancing.
Moreover, we gain physical and mental health through dancing.
>> Furthermore, dancing improves our physical and mental wellbeing.
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