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I think that it will be diligent. It’s the positive thing that working weekend. And i can make more money. So it can be save money a lot.
But i don’t like to work on weekend. Because i like to rest and watching youtube or other OTT service.
If they give money twice as long as before, i willing to work on weekend. But if they give me money as it, i won’t do that.
Working weekend is the good things that i can be diligent and get more money.
But my mental health will be bad.
So i don’t want to work on weekend.
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I think that it will be diligent.
>> I believe I will be diligent.
It’s the positive thing that working weekend.
>> Working on the weekend is a good thing.
And i can make more money.
>> And I can earn more money.
So it can be save money a lot.
>> As a result, you can save a lot of money.
But i don’t like to work on weekend. Because i like to rest and watching youtube or other OTT service.
>> But I don\'t like working on weekends. Because I enjoy resting and watching YouTube or other OTT services.
If they give money twice as long as before, i willing to work on weekend.
>> I\'m willing to work on weekends if they give me twice as much money as before.
But if they give me money as it, i won’t do that.
>> But if they just give me same amount of money, I\'m not going to do it.
Working weekend is the good things that i can be diligent and get more money.
>> Working on weekends allows me to be diligent and earn more money.
But my mental health will be bad.
>> But my mental health will suffer as a result.
So i don’t want to work on weekend.
>> So I don\'t want to work on weekends.
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