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2018-03-20 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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Composition writing Topic : Evertone should adopt vegetarian diet because eating meat can cause serious health problems. Do you agree or dis agree? >>I disagree that. But I think it\'s good for health to eat vegetables rather than to eat too fatty meats each time. The important thing is a balanced diet. I think that eating the proper amount of meat is good for health.

강사 첨삭

Thank you so much CHOI for your opinion.

I highly appreciate it.

See you tomorrow!

~Teacher Shanee^^,

Composition writing
Topic : Evertone should adopt vegetarian diet because eating meat can cause serious health problems. Do you agree or dis agree?
>>> Everyone should adopt vegetarian diet because eating meat can cause serious health problems. Do you agree or disagree?

>> I disagree that.

>>> I disagree with that.

But I think it\'s good for health to eat vegetables rather than to eat too fatty meats each time.

>>> But I think it\'s good for our health to eat vegetables rather than to eat fatty meat each time.

The important thing is a balanced diet.

>>> Correct!

I think that eating the proper amount of meat is good for health.

>>> I think that eating the proper amount of meat is good for the health.

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