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학생이 쓴 원문
I always mutter to myself “This experience will help me a lot later, so try my luck” I think I had more challenges since I keep saying my motto.
I’d like to be a flight attendant.
Since my major is Horticulture, most people asked me “Why do you want to be a flight attendant in spite of your major?"
and I used to answer them this, "While I'm studying I have learned to be affectionate and warm-hearted person because we learned how to love and take care of plants. I personally think that plants are the same as humans since plants can’t live and grow without concern, care or love."
강사 첨삭
You're right about saying that plants and people have a lot of things in common. We also need to be nurtured and cared for. ^^ Here are my corrections.
I always mutter to myself “This experience will help me a lot later, so try my luck”
>>I always mutter to myself, "This experience will help me a lot later, so I have to try my luck all the time."
I think I had more challenges since I keep saying my motto.>>I think I had more challeges since I kept saying my motto.I’d like to be a flight attendant.Since my major is Horticulture>>I'd like to be a flight attendant eventhough my maor is Horticulture., most people asked me “Why do you want to be a flight attendant in spite of your major?">>Most people ask me why I wanted to be a flight attendance in spite of my major.and I used to answer them this, "While I'm studying I have learned to be affectionate and warm-hearted person because we learned how to love and take care of plants. I personally think that plants are the same as humans since plants can’t live and grow without concern, care or love."
>>I used to answer them, "While I'm studying, I have learned to be affectionate and warm-hearted person because we learned how to love and take care of plants. I personally think that plants are the same as humans since plants can't live and grow without concern, care or love."
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