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학생이 쓴 원문
I attended school leaver of my oldest daughter but I was late with my husband.
But she seemed happy.
We took a picture together.
강사 첨삭
I attended school leaver of my oldest daughter but I was late with my husband.
>> I attended my daughter\'s graduation but my husband and I were late.
But she seemed happy.
>> But daughter seemed happy.
or
>> But my daughter still looked happy.
We took a picture together.
>> Correct
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