3-8th Homework

We live in a very convenient community while we don't exactly know about a machine that we are using for us. Actually, we neglect the theory of the machine and we just see the function of the machine. It's because all of us want to conveniently live without any problems. So, a desire of human makes a modern society composed with appliances and auto-vehicle. In this processing, humans have been released from hard labors. But humans don't still satisfy with their outcomes that evoke a convenient life. As we live in modern society surrounded with the machines, we are more and more tightly connected with the machines. Finally, if we don't have it, we couldn't do anything. It seems to be like a slave of the machine. The degree of labor in modern isn't harder than that before the industrial revolution. Actually, I don't agree with it. Even though there were many skills and they were implemented into a machine, the desire for the skills is not decreased. Instead, we want to get better skills.

  Hi, [이름]! Thank you very much for doing your homework. ^_^ I enjoyed reading your insights. I think machines are very helpful for us because in one way or another, they have made our lives far more convenient and easy. I think the only disadvantage is that people have the tendency to become lazy because of these wondrous inventions. Anyhow, that is just my opinion. I hope you\'re doing great. See you again on Tuesday. Take care and stay warm. ~Teacher C[이름] ^_^ We live in a very convenient community while we don\'t exactly know about a machine that we are using for us. >> [Do you mean]: We live in a very convenient community but we don\'t exactly know the use of machine for us. Actually, we neglect the theory of the machine and we just see the function of the machine. >> CORRECT! OR >> Actually, we neglect the theory about machines and just see their function/benefit. It\'s because all of us want to conveniently live without any problems. >> CORRECT! OR >> This is because we only care about living a convenient life. So, a desire of human makes a modern society composed with appliances and auto-vehicle. >> So, a desire of human can make a modern society composed of appliances and motor-vehicle. In this processing, humans have been released from hard labors. >> In this process, humans have been released from hard labor. But humans don\'t still satisfy with their outcomes that evoke a convenient life. >> But humans are still not satisfied with their outcomes that evoked a convenient life. As we live in modern society surrounded with the machines, we are more and more tightly connected with the machines. >> As we live in a modern society surrounded by machines, we get more and more tightly connected with machines. Finally, if we don\'t have it, we couldn\'t do anything. >> CORRECT! OR >> Finally, we\'ve become so dependent on machines. It seems to be like a slave of the machine. >> We seem to be slaves of machines. The degree of labor in modern isn\'t harder than that before the industrial revolution. >> [Do you mean]: The degree of labor in modern world isn\'t as hard as the industrial revolution. Actually, I don\'t agree with it. >> CORRECT! OR >> But I don\'t agree with it. Even though there were many skills and they were implemented into a machine, the desire for the skills is not decreased. >> Even though there were many skills that were incorporated in a machine, the desire for skills is still there. Instead, we want to get better skills. >> CORRECT! OR >> We want to get better skills instead.